The Tidy Gardener (HM)
by Mr. Darcy Nov 2, 2015
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9 years ago
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The Tidy Gardener by Mr Darcy
(4pts.)
As adoring of funny poems as I am, I couldn't let this slip through. Quite uniquely you also slipped in an acrostic to sound out comically the noise the rake made. I literally laughed at this poem. Huge smiles and great write, thanks for the laugh. -
10 years ago
by Everlasting
Hahaha, I enjoyed the humour.
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10 years ago
by Meena Krish
Ah...that is life just to bring us back to reality something must be in the way to whack us back to earth! Sweet.
I saw the acrostic and can understand WACK but THWACK did not make sense to me...maybe that is the sound of rake wack :D Enjoyed this read.-
10 years ago
by Mr. Darcy
Thank you Meena,
the word 'thwack' is an actual word; a funny one too. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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10 years ago
by J Nair
Your poems never fail to put a smile on my face.
Humour flows from you so effortlessly!!
Thank You Mr. Darcy.
Jay -
10 years ago
Michaell!
You just keep making me laugh, every time I set foot into one of your poems.
I hope your foot is now better. Nasty things rakes!
I love your line : 'Kissed by my garden rake.'
That is just so funny!
An excellent read Michael! You should be on stage somewhere with your talent for penning such humorous lines!
