Dec 6 - A n endless cycle of Unification and Purification

by Everlasting   Dec 7, 2015


Like rain that clouds cry,
we came to fall from the sky
to be a multitude of drops
that form on the ground
a tiny little pond

but then as time went by
and as we stood there calm
there came a force
that with a jump
scattered us, splish - splash,
some drops in here,
some drops in there,

to form
two tiny little ponds.

But then as time went by
and as the heat of the day
began to increment
the two ponds started to evaporate

to once again be
like rain that clouds cry
to be a multitude of drops
that form on the ground
a tiny little pond

that then as time went by
became scattered by a force
to form many tiny little ponds

that as the heat of the day
began to increment
started to evaporate

to once again be
like rain that clouds cry....

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  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    An endless cycle of Unification and Purification

    ^^This title attracts readers because of the words unification and purification. At least for me it was. In many ways and in many things unification and purification takes place which we don't see.

    Like rain that clouds cry

    ^^I also like the repetition of this line-there is a soothing effect to it when its been read. A calming statement which brings the reader back to a state of ease. I also can see the two ponds as two people from afar falling, growing and fading together. There is much behind this poem than what grabs the mind...I like it!

  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Beautiful and I love watching raindrps fall. Scattered all over the place but never one alone.

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