Love you

by NOOR   Jan 29, 2016


I loved you
Until the last drop
I enjoyed your warmness
As you played your fingers
On my pale skin
I smiled
Opened myself to you
Like a flower in a vase
Although knowing
This all shall last just
Blink of an ehe
I love you
Until the stars on your eyes shall fall

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  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    Noor,

    Loves ups and downs summed up nicely in one beautiful piece

    Em

  • 9 years ago

    by Shah

    Beautiful poem Noor,

    I see all the beauty of it in these words:

    Opened myself to you
    Like a flower in a vase

    A moment when the love of a lover is appreciated and answered by his beloved one....

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Noor,

    As Michael says, lovely to see a new poem from you, although I understand that life gets in the way sometimes.
    You have summed up the beauty and the tragedy of love wonderfully here which isn't easy in a small piece.
    All the best,
    ben

  • 9 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    A beautiful Love poem Noor, on the often fragility of Love. Many of us have had that sad experience, which you have described very well in your words.
    Well penned!

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a beautiful love poem.
    Take care
    Cindy

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