Unforgetable you

by NOOR   Jan 30, 2016


I try so hard
To forget your smile
I push myself forward
And close the doors back
Like I would lock
Breathe of summer
In the cold snow castle
I feel your hands on my shoulders
Even you aren't there
It is difficult to fight
Against real burning feelings
When a little lost girl
Found a piece of heaven
In your arms

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Noor,

    What a beautiful piece. It is always hard to 'forget' someone that meant so much to you. I can feel the emotion in this piece.

    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Amit Mudgal

    Hello Noor

    Wonderful written , Keep it up

  • 8 years ago

    by Shah

    Very cute words....

    When a little lost girl
    Found a piece of heaven
    In your arms

    yes you are right here, the feeling of real love is not less than heaven

  • 8 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Beautiful words Noor, simply beautiful!
    Loved this!

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Noor,

    This really is a thoroughly emotional and moving little piece of poetry from you.
    All the best and take care,
    Ben

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