Ghost

by NOOR   Feb 3, 2016


He came out of nowhere
With a smile on his face
Appeared so suddenly
Made me all thinking
Was it magic or a trick
His words spelling
Made me hold my breathe
Intoxicating
I could not see or hear
But only sense his presense
And he made me wanted more
And boom
He disappeared
All else but in my heart
All my existing yelled
And I turned to statue
A doll
Not living

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  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    Noor,

    This is a very moving, emotional write.

    Em

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Noor,

    as ben says, this is a very chilling write, especially the 'doll' reference. It comes across that there is an abuse of power causing a feeling of worthlessness, being something less than human, unmoving, inanimate, doll like.

    I hope you are okay Noor.

    Take care ((hugs))

    Michael

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Noor,

    A sad poem with what I found to be a very chilling and moving end.
    Take care and all the best,
    Ben

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