Knife
by NOOR Dec 8, 2015
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A knife on my chest |
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10 years ago
by Mr. Darcy
Hello,
As Ben says, the ending is excellent. A chilling threat.
Take care,
Michael -
10 years ago
A sad write Noor, but worded beautifully, with great imagery.
As Ben says, the last three lines are especially well expressed, they just couldn't be better!
Wish I'd thought of those verses!
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10 years agoby Ben Pickard
The last three lines of this are superb, Noor. The language used is lovely.
A good poem overall and another sad write from you.
Do take care,
Ben
