Of love and Life (Than Bauk)

by GB   May 6, 2016


Of love and Life

Entwined in gaze,
hopes rephrase words.
Love sways but stays...

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* Maybe inspired by "Jane Eyre".

** A Than-Bauk, conventionally a witty saying or epigram, is a three line "climbing rhyme" poem of Burmese origin. Each line has four syllables. The rhyme is on the fourth syllable of the first line, the third syllable of the second line, and the second syllable of the third line.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Abstract Poet

    Absolutely beautiful poem.

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Samia what a beautiful poem and just (maybe) based on one of the best novels there is.

    Beautiful, Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Lovely, Very Lovely, Great Job GB!!!

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Samia
    What a lovely little write based on (,maybe!) One of the great love affairs. I have always enjoyed that book and this is excellent.
    'love sways but stays' - that's wonderful

    Take care and all the best
    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    This is really neat write-I have never heard of this type of poem, thank you for the footnote.

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