Cold

by deeplydesturbed   Jul 7, 2016


It is freezing cold.
I can't fall asleep like this.
Water bottle work!

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  • 9 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    I suggest changing "I can't fall asleep in this" to "I can't fall asleep like this". It just sounds better to me :P

    I like it to be cold out, personally; perhaps you need more blankets? :P Cold weather is perfect in that blankets GALORE!

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    Much love,
    IdTakeABulletForYou

    • 9 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thank you :)
      I do have a LOT of blankets.. Its just cold. It was around 3 degrees Celsius when I was on my way to work. =/
      Have made edits.

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