Soul

by deeplydesturbed   Jul 12, 2016


Reflecting windows.
Look past the mirror image.
You can see my soul

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  • 9 years ago

    by Brenda

    Beautifully done Naomi. You see a lot peering into a mirror. I know sometimes I don't like what I see, but I still try to say or think something positive.

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    N, what a lovely senryu. we all need time to reflect to find ourselves.
    I agree with Sir L it would be good to be able to look straight to a person soul to see through all the rubbish.

    Em

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A well written senryu. I often think that it would be wonderful if we could look into a mirror or see someone else's reflection and cut past the rubbish and see straight into the 'beast' of the matter!

    SL

    • 9 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks for the comment SL. I agree :) i would love to see straight through souls

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