Intangible
by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko Aug 13, 2016
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Reveries are too sad to hide beneath your skies, |
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9 years ago
Hello Kabayan (mahal ko kuya ko),
It's very challenging to put everything,all the feelings you want to say in a short yet profound composition.. you are really a genius.
from the Philippines,
Geegoldrodriguez -
9 years ago
Hello Kabayan (mahal ko kuya ko),
It's very challenging to put everything,all the feelings you want to say in a short yet profound composition.. you are really a genius.
from the Philippines,
Geegoldrodriguez -
9 years ago
by Mr. Darcy
Hello,
great descriptive work here. The feeling of wistfulness is evident in this atmospheric piece.
Well done and take care,
Michael -
9 years agoby Em
Mahal, as Hellon and Sir L have stated this piece is unique compared to what you're used to writing and as a reader of your work it's very intriguing as to why this is such a sombre piece.
All the best, Em -
9 years ago
by Ben Pickard
A lovely flow to this poem that really does pull at the heart strings.
As Hellon alludes to, this is a different write compared to what I have read of your work previously, but it is excellent nonetheless.
SL
