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by deeplydesturbed Aug 29, 2016
Love, romance /
Entering the home
to smells of honeycomb
Hands begin to roam
He's in the zone.
On the staircase
It's a race
to third base.
Nice and simple, enjoyed it, well done. :)
Naomi, this is a really good piece. I like the short, racy lines because they set the scene for hearts racing and how things would,be heading to third base lol. Takes me back ;)
All the best, Em
Thanks Em :)
N, nicely done! Good rhyming, a story line that flows nicely. It's fun to think about those days when you end up dashing up the stairs or the couch, or many other places.....
Agree! Just days when ya know what ya want and go for it..
by Ben Pickard
I think I know what third base is and - as a youngster - I was always fairly happy with the idea of dashing for second. However, if third was achieved, all well and good...
Haha yep :)
by Mr. Darcy
...okay, but apart from that I was spot on!! Lol
Lol yes! ;) haha