Miscellaneous

by deeplydesturbed   Aug 31, 2016


Lightning strikes an empty beach
thunder roars in the night sky.
Rain falls from heavy clouds
allowing our atmosphere to cry.

One lonely shadow in each flash
drawn out across the sand.
Looking out at restless waves
trying to rush to land.

A bright flash followed by counting
then boom boom boom.
The storm is closing the gap
the clouds are looking for moving room.

The shadow on the beach
is moving with the light.
Each time nearer to the water
moving out of site.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    N, totally digging the imagery here. To be out in this crazy storm, edging ever closer to the water, extremely vivid. Well done-

    • 7 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks Brenda. Although someone disagreed haha. someone has given it a 4 but not said why =/
      Id love to know if i can improve on it!

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Some wonderful imagery here. I love a good thunderstorm.
    Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Some wonderful imagery here. I love a good thunderstorm.
    Em

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