Fall

by Brenda   Dec 14, 2016


The frost has kissed
the leaves lying in my yard,
sparkles with the sun...

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  • 9 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    The expression of nature within these three lines is very fantastic. Nice write.

    • 9 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much!

  • 9 years ago

    by stormingdance (Lessa)

    Lovely! Exquisite execution.

    • 9 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much!

  • 9 years ago

    by Brenda

    Thank you both! Fall is my favorite season, even as the days get colder.

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    Absolutely fantastic

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Brenda,

    There is something satisfying about a frozen leaf. I like the crunch potential. I also like the sheen that you described. Well done.

    Michael x

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