Stardust (Tanka)

by stormingdance (Lessa)   Jun 30, 2017


And if we're enough
We will gather up the sun
Together we will
become one - Together we
Will be reborn as stardust

-
5/7/5/7/7
Tanka

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  • 8 years ago

    by Ren

    Beautiful!!

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Jess, I see you love stars! Have to agree with Ben, tankas are adorable and this one is another great example. Beautiful!

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I love tankas, Jessica and this is beautiful.
    *your note states 5/7/5/7/5 but I think you mean 5/7/5/7/7

    All the best,

    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    This is so beautiful and speaks to me of a strong relationship

    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by stormingdance (Lessa)

      I like your interpretation! :) I don't really prefer love poems, though. lol

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