Bullet (Senryu) - 1

by Augustus Black Jul 29, 2017 category : Love, romance / first love

i shoot in her heart
and now she is falling fast;
a bullet of love.
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Date - 21st April 2017

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8 years ago
by Ben Pickard

Great little senryu, Augustus.
All the best,
Ben
8 years ago
by Em

This is astounding work!!
8 years ago
by mossgirl19

Is AB in love? :-) Nice little write.
- 8 years ago
  by Augustus Black
  
  May be.... He! He! Thanks for the comment. Mel.

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