by Michael Apr 2, 2017
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
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Disparate visions, dwell in my mind. |
by anand singh
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Another beautifully penned piece. An enjoyable read. Keep up the good work. |
by BlueJay
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I love the tempo of this piece and how it doesn't feel like an acrostic at all. But ultimately, my favorite thing about this piece is definitely your sense of voice. Nicely penned! |
by Brenda
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Super cool acrostic! Loved the visuals-well done- |
by Michael
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Hey Ren, wows and awesomes! Wonderful words used in your comments, which are so meaningful and inspiring. Thank you so much. |
by Ren
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Like Em said, I want to say more than just wow...but...words have failed me at the moment...so... |
by mossgirl19
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I will echo what Ren said. WOW! |