Guys

by Jenny Paradise   Aug 10, 2017


There are guys who are lovers,
And guys who are leavers.
Guys that are thoughtful,
Guys who are deceivers.

Some just wanna make you smile,
And some who are just plain rude.
There's guys who show respect,
While others only want you nude.

There's guys who just wanna have sex,
And guys who want something more.
Guys who will shatter your heart,
And guys to pick it up off the floor.

There's two types of guys out there,
Wondering around on this earth.
Guys who don't care at all,
And guys who know your worth.

There's guys that like to play games,
And guys who wanna settle down.
Some who don't care of you cry,
And some who would never make you frown.

There's spiteful guys and cheaters,
The ones who have no heart.
Guys who are simply amazing,
Who love you from the start.

Guys who never ever call,
Guys who blow up your phone.
Guys who cancel plans,
Guys who won't leave you alone.

So when you finally find a guy,
Make sure he's the right choice.
And if you choose the wrong one,
Stand up and don't lose your voice.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Lucifer

    It's a long poem, but the rhythm; the message you have tried to give connects the reader through out the poem.
    Last stanza, really makes the difference and the last two lines gives it the perfect end.

  • 6 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Definitely - without question - the best piece I've read from you so far. The rhythm was strong, the content had depth, that there was a wonderful variety of language. I really enjoyed this piece from you. Well done.

    One super minor issue. In the third line of the fifth stanza, I think it was supposed to be 'if', not 'of'. But other than that. Great work

    • 6 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      I agree with Brad on this. Great work here!

    • 6 years ago

      by Jenny Paradise

      Thank you I've been working on that one for a few days

    • 6 years ago

      by Jenny Paradise

      This one has a lot of meaning to my situation.

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