Haiku

by MoonMaiden   Oct 21, 2017


Racism is terrifying
Consumed by hatred and scorn
Im terrified for our future.

........this is my first haiku. Not sure if its right..but if you read then pls comment.......

    report violation
1


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    http://www.edu.pe.ca/stjean/playing%20with%20poetry/Hennessey/howtohaiku.htm
    ^
    Hello, I've read your haiku poems. This is a tricky form to get right. Many of us, myself incuded, are still learning.

    The link provided will help you more than I can.

    Take care.

    • 7 years ago

      by MoonMaiden

      Yes, being my first haiku this link helps a lot. I forget the basic 5, 7, 5. Thank you for your help.

  • 8 years ago

    by ddavidd

    Good afford dear friend for the first time specially. Looking forward to read many, many more.

More Poems By MoonMaiden