Domestic Bliss

by Paul Hirst   Nov 9, 2017


The house is so quite as I walk down the stairs head throbbing with hangover
beard rasping on my calloused hand the ticking of the hallway clock as loud as a marching band

The living room is spotless gleaming everything in its place the mirror flawless only accentuates the yellow bloodshot eyes the grey sagging face

The kitchen is warm from the stove the breakfast table immaculate earthenware gleaming coffee pot steaming

As I sit you place a warm plate of bacon and eggs in front of me then pour the coffee and as I take a small bite just a taste you touch my face and I look up at you then pull you close bury my head in your waist and say
I'm sorry it won't happen again

You ruffle my hair then sit down across from me and I see your pain as a tear slowly escapes from your bruised left eye and blood seeps from your swollen split lip

You smile and pick up your coffee and take a painful tentative sip

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  • 6 years ago

    by Paul Hirst

    No problem
    Thank You

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Oh Paul, thank you for calling my fears. I'm sorry you grew up with this. It really is a wonderful write.

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Hi Paul,

    I am so relieved this is from your minds eye, it is brutal and felt real if I was honest, but poetry can have that way. So I feel with your comments that there is sad truth in this piece of past experience, not as you being the perpetrator, but from what you have seen.
    A very powerful write indeed.
    Michael

    • 6 years ago

      by Paul Hirst

      Thanks Michael
      Felt Real
      There's no better accolade
      I assure you I'm happily married lol
      Its partly life partly dealing with the issue
      Thank You

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Paul, I will be honest, I had a hard time hitting the like button on this. Not because of the poem, it's excellent, hard hitting. More about the content. It was a hard read because of that. Domestic violence is awful, it destroys everything in its path and has permently ruined more than one person. I hope like hell this isn't literal, if it is please seek help immediately.

    • 6 years ago

      by Paul Hirst

      Glad it made you uncomfortable its what I aimed for
      All my poems are from my minds eye nothing more nothing less
      I was a Mental Health Drug and Alcohol worker for many years and dealt with DV
      I also grew up in a household were my mother abused my dad
      So partly life partly dealing with people who have suffered

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