This is how I unfold our love

by Amrita Singh   Dec 12, 2017


Recapitulating from its birth
to its demise
We deep-rooted it
Nurtured it
It blossomed
It grew
Like a healthy and happy plan
withstanding all the phrases
It sustained to grow its parts
but
couldn't resist the hurricane
of altered feelings
Deprived of love and warmth
it uprooted itself
Withered and decayed
Its parts crumbled into million shards
Pleaded to bloom again.
-Amrita

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  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Sub judge Comment:

    I’ve read poems which describes what love is about and
    how it works. This though is different. I like the usage of language,
    the metaphors and the simplicity of it. We all have different
    views about love and this speaks how love can be nurtured
    and perhaps healed…a very nice read!

    • 7 years ago

      by Amrita Singh

      I appreciate your time :)
      Thank you so much for appreciating my work :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Congratulations on your HM. Best wishes Milly x

  • 8 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Possibility, to pain. Beautifully crafted.
    Well done.
    Catherine x

    • 8 years ago

      by Amrita Singh

      Thank you so much for your kind review, Catherine :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Lovely use of extended metaphor here with some wonderful descriptive writing throughout.

    Take care and all the best,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Amrita Singh

      Thank you so much Ben ! Looking forward to read beautiful compositions from you :)
      Take care you too! :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Love like life in my opinion is what we make it. Fantastic write

    All the best

    • 8 years ago

      by Amrita Singh

      Yes, I agree with your statement! Thank you Em :)

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