Comments : To my Valentine (Milly's thread)

  • 2 years ago

    by Ren

    Sweet lady!! This is so beautiful! And that last line gave me chills! Love it! <3

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Beautiful, Mel.

    All the best,


  • 2 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Competition huh?
    You won't let me win that's why you posted the same week.
    Jokes apart!
    Mel, it's so good to see you back with full on power and whenevr you write you definitely take my breath away.

    Very beautiful

    Guys, My soul is texting this comment.

  • 2 years ago

    by Gwenyth Hill

    Enchantingly beautiful. Great write!

  • 2 years ago

    by Michael

    Miss Mel,

    Your romantic side flows all through your beautiful piece. Love it!
    Much love
    Michael :)x

  • 2 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I love the purity of this, and also how you have found your sense of self and individuality, not lost it. I think that's equally important. Balancing one another's weight without compromising who each of you stand for. Very sweet poem in its simplicity and strength of heart. It seems few can define the true beauty and wonder of two people becoming one and growing, as one...

  • 2 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I loved this poem when you published it on the Valentines Thread and it is beautiful. I know the breath taking away feeling of being in love and I am so glad that you do too. Its a lovely romantic read. All my best wishes Milly x

  • 2 years ago

    by Wuggleberry

    It is lovely to see that love exists in such a beautiful and special way.

  • 2 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very Nice!!!

  • 2 years ago

    by Milo

    I never found my individuality
    until I tumbled into your loving arms and wrestled in your weight against mine.

    The magic and mystery of two people becoming one-
    It never fails to take my breath away.

    Aww. You are always clever with words.

  • 2 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I have no idea which line to pick out as a favorite
    because they are all so tender and passionately written.
    In this short verse there is a fire and I like the image!
    Well done!

  • 2 years ago

    by Bleu


  • 2 years ago

    by Fredy RoMa0u Sanchez

    Your work always takes my breath away

  • 2 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy


    the imagery in your first line is both sensual and evocative. Your sentiments of the magic and mystery of two people becoming one, is one I share. Just like the sun heart slowing descending onto the cooling blue ocean. I like too, the explosion of thousands of dandelion seeds - an exquisite way to describe the climax of love.

    Most enjoyable.

  • 2 years ago

    by RustySoul

    A blend of love and sensuality. Great work!!