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by Kitty Cat Lady Feb 13, 2018
Love, romance /
I really am so sorry
How perfect it would be
If I felt the same about you
As how you feel for me
But I can't force a feeling
My heart has a mind of its own
And even though you're lovely
It keeps telling me 'No!'
I want to keep you in my life
But that's a selfish ruse
And though I'd love that dearly
It's not something you should choose
You need to let it go now
Find a heart that sings for yours
Spring clean the cobwebs of me
And throw open your doors
This unrequited love will pass
I've been there and remember it well
I may have just made a huge mistake
But I'm afraid only time will tell.
Lovely poem...the heart wants what the heart wants, and also what it doesn't. Well done...love the flow and ease of the rhyming
by Kitty Cat Lady
Thanks Yogi! :-) x
by William Mae
Sometimes the feeling just comes up short. No wow factor, no deep stirring. You nailed the feelings and emotion of that in this write. Very well done.
Thanks so much William :-) x
The rhyming was spot on which made the poem flow elegantly.. Thought somewhat sad, the meaning behind it is powerful & sometimes letting go isn't a easy task. But you put it into a perspective that makes sense. (:
Also, thank you for your lovely comment (:
Thanks so much K, I appreciate that :-) x
Awww...lovely but with a sad theme, Kitty. Loved your rhyming.
Thanks so much Mel :-) x
Kitty, very beautiful poem about unrequited love.
Thanks so much Shane :-) x
by Maple Tree