by Walter Aug 15, 2018
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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You've been abused and pushed to the ground |
by gumshuda
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Judging comment: |
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Excellent poem |
by Walter
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Thanks Larry for pointing that out. I originally didn't have "has" in the first version & forgot to pick up on the change you mentioned. Cheers! |
by Blank
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A dark poem but written well. |
by Walter
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Thank you Fenrir |