Huge swoon here Daniel - this is beautiful and sensual. Nominated :-) x
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A beautiful floral tribute to one loved. I loved the imagery that shouts out all the lovely things of a Summers day. Kitty beat me to the post in nominating. A stunning piece. Milly x

Glad to see this nominated

Lovely poem, Daniel.

Oh, yes, I like this:
the imagery
the tenderness
the refrained verse
the the the
gosh, it's good!

This is incredible. Every word, every sense and feeling, feels like one of my own. I guess we both are Neruda's fan.

Oh this is absolutely beautiful!!

well, well fella who said romance was dead! ;0 certainly not here, lovely imagery throughout and an awesome end to a fine piece of work fella :)

Warm feeling— that’s what the last stanza invoked in me.

Congratulation

Congrats on your win!

I'm so glad this wonderful write won. Well done.

Beautiful and well deserved

"as you threaded a dandelion
through your amber curls,"

The whole piece is brimming with beautiful imagery, but these lines held such... I don't even know but wow! Simple and satisfying!

Such a beautiful scene captured here. Such beautiful words! Congrats on the win!