Faded Pastels

by Aegis   Jun 11, 2019


A teary-eyed half moon
is smeared low across
a hushed sky-

muted.

And I wonder if I
appear the same.

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  • 1 week ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Observation
    Reflection

  • 1 week ago

    by Milly Hayward

    The measure of a poem is how it touches the hearts and mind of others. This does so. To imagine oneself teary eyed and muted is so powerful. Loved it. Milly x

    • 1 week ago

      by Aegis

      Always a pleasure Milly^_^

  • 1 week ago

    by Brenda

    Loved this Aegis!

  • 1 week ago

    by S.T.A.R.

    This is original imagination, I love it!!

    • 6 days ago

      by Aegis

      Thank you STAR!!!!

  • 1 week ago

    by Rania Moallem

    What an imagination :) I completely and absolutely admire and love this style, I might be biased because it calls my own style of writing and I feel as though the poems are speaking to me. I think it's a great piece, full of expression. Gem!

    • 1 week ago

      by Aegis

      Thanks Rania! I wrote this before I fell asleep last night and wasn't expecting all this feedback. This community keeps me going<3

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