Low Pitch

by Sunshine   Jun 8, 2020


The clouds
made no art to the sky today.

Dark flourished in the quite.

No breeze caressing grass
to break the silence,
no shadows
beneath the trees.

There were no crowds
to fill the gap
and she,
shall miss you silently,
tonight.

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  • 3 years ago

    by Star

    “ The clouds
    made no art to the sky today.”
    ^
    I love this line!!

    “ and she,
    shall miss you silently,
    tonight.”
    ^
    I am no expert, but in my opinion “tonight” had threw off the flow a little bit. Maybe moving it before she would sound better?

    Anyways, this is a beautiful poem the title wraps it up in a great way!!

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