by yogi73   Jun 14, 2020

The deeper aspects of life
They twine and
entwine growing rich
weaving sorrow and joy.
We watched eternity, never knowing if it would end but at the end the heart song came unstrung. Desperate breaths disbelieving the loss. Dig deep into the soul, hang upon that which we served highest.
- How we loved! -
Mired in unmovable positions that didn't serve, diming the light of love, pulling into the dark that which should have soared. Outside the orbit
- Not knowing if love is strong enough
Not knowing if forgiveness is enough -


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  • 1 year ago

    by Skyfire

    Particularly liked this line..."We watched eternity, never knowing if it would end." It made me think about how isn't eternity supposed to be endless? It seems that way when we love someone, that it will be forever, but I think there's always that small thought in the back of the mind that maybe... It won't be.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is so full of wonderful language; it is really well written throughout. Expertly done, truly.

  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    ....and the years should have thought us about experience when mingled with emotions...deep.
    Good to see a new write from you and I hope you are well..take care