This Little Lagoon

I adore this, Lucero. I don't actually quite now how to put my finger on why! Your poetry is so unafraid and is lacking in overindulgence It's honestly so refreshing.

I can imagine a mother reading this to a child. It has a lullaby feel to it, and there is something also comforting and playful. I honestly hope this is on the front page next week. :)

I dont know how many times I read this, this is so well written!!!

Clever little piece, Lucero. I love the rhyming here.