A Song Was Written Erroneously

by The Parrott King Jordan R. Stephens   Jul 22, 2021


Caught you sitting; fingers spread,
Dusty organ keys , gut pit a coiled,
Crumbling forest fire ash. Pipes scream
at your touch. Notes discordant. Let’s discuss
Why you repeat yourself. Let’s discuss the organs.
You repeat yourself to remember.

The pipes are screaming,
Oil cleaned the keys they look pristine.
They’ll never forgive you.
Nerve-damaged thumb pressing
Just too hard—manipulation.
You repeat yourself when you’re scared.

Your neck stiffens. Sitting still
For so long will do that.
Open the pipes and let the air free.
They long to forget.
You repeat yourself when you’re scarred.
They haven’t forgotten yet.

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  • 2 years ago

    by nouriguess

    This is about scattered thoughts and anxiety and feeling disoriented and being constantly in alarm. The metaphor did a very good job making me realize how many times I’ve been there and felt like this. I love that you actually used repetitions to emphasize the hesitation and unease in your mind. I love the play on words. I think I have yet to come across a writer who could yield both their linguistic skill and their deep-seated emotions to write such fine but really relatable poetry. You always blow my mind.