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by Everlasting   Jun 2, 2022


an apple on a tree
a birdie on a bush
i see
a flower and a bee near grasses green

the rain speeding like a train
“Shoo shoo!”
children running towards home

mud slipping on their feet

the bee no where to be seen

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  • 2 months ago

    by BOB GALLO

    So sweet you exactly photographed the scenery with your words. I loved it!!

    But the second Bee can not be "a" it must be "the", otherwise it looks very clumsy.

    • 2 months ago

      by Everlasting

      True thank you. “the” is correct.