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by Everlasting Jun 2, 2022
an apple on a tree
a birdie on a bush
a flower and a bee near grasses green
the rain speeding like a train
children running towards home
mud slipping on their feet
the bee no where to be seen —-
Spit and post
by BOB GALLO
So sweet you exactly photographed the scenery with your words. I loved it!!
But the second Bee can not be "a" it must be "the", otherwise it looks very clumsy.
True thank you. “the” is correct.