Poisoned Dreams

by Katie Silva   Jul 29, 2004


Looking down the darkest road
Of my entire life
Never thought it would be
But its clear to see
that I've lost the fight

I try to go to sleep but the
harsh wind bites onto my skin
Never again will i open my heart
and let you in.

And like you the wind,
unmerciful and unkind
But without it i cant breathe
And its colors, i cant find.

All my poisoned dreams
seep into my veins
consuming me from within.
Makes its way in to my heart
And finally i give in.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    i lyke this one alot.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    Pretty good. Some of the lines should have been longer in order to fit in better with the rhythm, and some of the rhyme sets were used twice in the poem. That isn't necessarily a bad thing, I just wanted to point out you used words that rhymed with "in" twice. Actually, I've decided that REALLY doesn't matter, so ignore what I just said. Good poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Marta

    Very very good. You're a very passionate writer, I'm really starting to like your work! Good description, structure and use of words. I'm adding you to my favorites :)

    -Marta.

  • 19 years ago

    by julie

    excellent imagery, and the perfect words are used to convey the images! well done! Julie -xx-

  • 19 years ago

    by Lindsay

    I really liked this one. You have a nice vocabulary and the words flowed very nicely. Great job! Keep it up!

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