Nice!!!

WOw.. haha, omg. if that ever happened to me. i'd be so god dam embaressed. But at first people are thinking ''hey this is really sweet'' but at the end there laughing at themselves for believing it really happened. :p greatly worded *5*

definite 5, awesome work!

Dude, you had my sister and I rollin on the floor, very creative! You get a 5

hahahahahaha that s*!t was COMEDY! i was rollin. Great job you definately deserve a 5! keep up the great writing hope to see more from you. MuCh LoVe RoBIN

HAHAHA!!!! that was great. What a turn of events. Man you are so lucky that didn't happen. Keep up that is so damn original.

LOL...omg...hahah...that was a great poem...so real cuz all the description down to curlign toes...lol...and then the ending...wah...encore... haha..definately get a 5 for thast one!

OH MY GOD im in tears this is the best poem i sweat you did an amazing job with it - the way you described making love was so intense, great flow and rhymes and the end serious had me in tears not what i expected at all it made me laugh! So original ..keep it up well worth a five - a ten even! Much Luv Eirisa

oh wouldn't that be embarassing if it were true! LOL it was soooo funni, i liked it alot! your ending was amazing, it was soooo crack up! loved it!

xxoo,
alysse

omg thats halarious

HA HA HA HA HA ... that was awesome ... HA HA HA HA HA

that by far made my day!!! : )

If you liked "My First Time," then check out my new poem entitled "My Second Time" It's a great sequel. Enjoy!

OMG!, that was great....loved the beginning so so sweet, and beautiful and just DROP dead funny at the end, great work

i give it a 5. excellent job. descriptive. lol

hahaha omg that scks that happen to my sister tho and its the funniest thing Sorry!

oops i always forget to read the bottom so i guess it doesnt suck cause it never happened lol

oh god lol well the beginning was very sweet. Most 16 yr olds would use different wording which I dont think is the best of ideas. Respectful and a great poem. Funny ending.

HaHa!! That made me laugh...I'm still laughing...lol. Good job on this...nice flow and all that stuff you know-and very creative...lol. KIU!

--Sierra Rae

EXCELLENT!!! AMAZING!! all i can say!! too funny!!