Silent--crys

by Bre*Baby   Aug 18, 2004


I may not speak
but still i yell
silent cry
trying hard not to unveil
underestimating my pain
cringing at the thought of never being sane
blood hitting the ground
opening my mouth to scream
but nothing comes out
so it seems
i`m here all alone
but people surround
thinking I\'m happy because I put on a smile
not knowing how i really feel
deep down under
little by little my world turns grey
seeing nothing but pain
i can`t live this way
i don`t wanna die
but it just seems so right
come on Lord please
this can`t be my time
wondering how it happened
so soon laying there hearing people
cry but silently under it all
i know thieve always wanted me to die

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  • 19 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    wow! REALLY good poem, this part especially:

    trying hard not to unveil
    underestimating my pain
    cringing at the thought of never being sane
    blood hitting the ground

    i like it the most, though i'm not sure, why, it just sounds really good, great work! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by miss scooby

    This was a amazingly written poem, You know ur style has alot of emotion and thought within each word....5/5
    take care
    Scooby

  • 19 years ago

    by Kayla Sonya Dearing

    Hi brittany, Nice poem. I know how you feel. But thanks for commenting on my poem. Love ya Kala

  • 19 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    Your poems are sooo powerful..You write with alot of emotion!!! After I read your poems I feel soo sad, But your poems are great!!!!! I can really tell you put ALot of feeling into them!!! Wonderful!!
    much love
    elizabeth.

  • 19 years ago

    by Stacie

    that was a really good poem and sad, i dont want you to die :D because I love you because your one of my bestest friends!!! @--->---- keep writing

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