by Sean Allen Aug 29, 2004
category :
Life, society /
about society
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Paper thin candies strewn on the floor; |
by lana
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ALL YOUR POEM ARE GREAT |
by Darien
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Wow, this was a different write. Drugs huh? Well, at least we know you can write about almost anything. The 3rd line of the 2nd stanza seemed kind of long. But other than that, it was a great write. |
by Megann Lee
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Haha, I thought it was cute, though I'm not sure if you meant for it to be cute or not. Yet I found it to be very adorable. Anyway it flowed good, along with the rythym of it. |
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WOW. Im truly amazed by you. |
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Wow this is really good...very deep..i think the second stanza was my favorite too....i also loved your flow and how you were so descriptive 5/5 |