A way shown to death....

by Saravana Kumar S   Aug 29, 2004


The world is big enough,
to live,but it is so tough,
with u being so far away,
i will always lose my way.

There is no place to hide,
the feelings flowing inside,
in every way,it is written in ur name,
forever in my heart,it will be the same.

Darkness seems to surround me,
where is the sunshine,let me see,
please get me out of this darkness,
to a place where i can feel only happiness.

for the falling tears,there is no end,
for a broken heart,there is no way to mend,
life has become like a living hell,
had i forseen this,in love i wouldn't have fell.

Is,this the way my life should be,
for a girl,who never saw the love in me,
as she left,the world came crashing down,
on my little heart and the way to death was shown.

Walking in the way shown by her,
i turn back to see if she is there,
to say me alteast a final goodbye,
on a no return journey,towards the sky.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Mustardhart

    Another great piece shaped out of life's realities. Keep writing man

  • 19 years ago

    by Lucy

    very nice flow, you must loce someone a lot

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Morris

    Good job. Keep it up. I am sorry that she has you feeling like that.

    Ashley

  • Ahhh! I can see only pain... What happened to her? I am sorry what ever happened. Please take care of yourself. Who ever she is, she is making you write good poems.

  • 19 years ago

    by Megha

    touching... :-)