by Kaitlyn Sep 2, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I cry each night |
by Kaitlyn
thanks guys :) |
by Andrea
I think is this a really good poem. I especially like how you ended it instantly but still good. |
by tia
OH yea! That was great! Hats off to you on that one! Oh yes! ryhming alot! that was great! oh yea! goood job |
by Kaitlyn
yeah, thanks, I actually did intend to have it end quickly like that. The first few of my poems I entered aren't exactly the best ones, but thanks for your comment, I appreciate it. :) |
by james
Im really like the structure of your poem whether intentional or not. |