Daddy's Girl

by Unseen Exposure   Sep 9, 2004


You're supposed to be my father,
And me, your one daughter,
Don't push me away,

I try just so hard,
To retract these scars,
But my edges are frayed,

You're so hypocritical,
Jaded and cynical,
And I feel so small,

You watch as I cry,
And never do try,
You just let me I fall,

I'm closed and rejected,
No longer connected,
And, Dad, you don't know,

Each day I'm fading,
Lifeless, degrading,
I'm going to blow,

Some days you see me,
And wonder, “Who is she?,
Certainly not mine.”

But Daddy I need you,
Is it I'm see through,
Or are you just blind?

Please help me, I'm losing,
You're words are abusing,
Would you just stop?

I want you to trust me,
Don't try and adjust me,
Lend a hand, or back off,

The weight of the world,
On such a weak girl,
Is taking it's toll,

I feel so smothered,
And now being covered,
Buried in this hole,

A broken girl trying,
To her father she's crying,
But he cannot hear,

Dad, it's your daughter,
Please act like my father,
Or I may disappear …

** I know it still needs some work. But I'm having difficulties.

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  • 19 years ago

    by pinkalias

    i kno im becomming a fan,lol. but i liked this poem, its as lovely as your others. and i like it caz i know EXACTLY how u feel. this poem is almost the same relationship that i have with my own dad,

    *princess

  • 19 years ago

    by Roula

    oh wow this was amazing ... i hope its not true ... i've read lots of poems regarding this issue ... but i still cant imagine how a parent can neglect or abuse his or her child in any way ... ur a very good writer ... i liked the rhyming style, nice idea ... :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Kevin J

    I think you did a good job;)

    I hope the write did it's job of helping you bridge that gap with your dad.

    Thanx 4 your comment btw!