I give up - You win

by Unseen Exposure   Sep 22, 2004



Take my words and twist them,
Turn their meanings inside-out,
Make a point of something pointless,
And leave me here without,

Shout cruel things in anger,
Disregard our seldom past,
Disgrace me and my family,
So you'll feel better at last,

Blame those that are innocent,
Because it makes you feel guilt free,
Show the world you care not about,
What others choose to see,

Point the finger at anyone,
As long as it's not you,
For you are never the one at fault,
Wrongs- you never do,

Explain in such great detail,
A story you create,
Throw your twisted games inside,
Until it's all conceived in hate,

Bend over backwards to hurt,
The ones that love you most,
Erase them from your life,
And leave your intended post,

Lie and betray us all,
And accuse others when you're done,
You've had the last word, I give up,
Forget it- You have won.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Nicholas

    Hey, I'm kind if a newbie to this poetry thing, so could you, maybe, read some of mine. And just tell me what you think?

  • 19 years ago

    by FireCracker

    hey ! I saw you commented on Eirisa's poem " Accept MY Call" and I check up on that poem to see who all comments on it because she wrote it for me and my guy situation , hehe, and I saw you rname and just had to click on it to look at your poetry; and OMG its AMAZING yeah most are sad but so emotional and heartfelt and wonderful .. you are an amzing poet keep it up and you will go far ! ... Check out some of mine sometime if you get a chance , id love the feedback ... Gave it a 5 !

  • 19 years ago

    by FireCracker

    hey ! I saw you commented on Eirisa's poem " Accept MY Call" and I check up on that poem to see who all comments on it because she wrote it for me and my guy situation , hehe, and I saw you rname and just had to click on it to look at your poetry; and OMG its AMAZING yeah most are sad but so emotional and heartfelt and wonderful .. you are an amzing poet keep it up and you will go far ! ... Check out some of mine sometime if you get a chance , id love the feedback ... Gave it a 5 !

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Missing Them Already*~

    Katie, i absolutely love the poem! Hey, is everything goin okay? I haven't heard from you in a while and i'm worried i've offended you somehow. Will you please e-mail me!
    Love
    Sam

  • 19 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    Biting. I love it! I hope the individual(s) that "inspired" this critique somehow saw it.

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