Wet soil

by Aken Sol   Sep 22, 2004


Dirt.
Paved earth road
Leading to nowhere.

Encircled.
A merry-go-round from hell.
Destination? None.

Moving feet
Constantly going.
Useless moon
Constantly glowing

Like mindless sheep.
Live and than, eternal sleep.

The sky laughs mockingly,
With superior knowledge and power.
Laughing, laughing continuously.
But the dirt shall still be there.
Always there.
Forever content.
And so it rains.

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  • 21 years ago

    by DMG

    nice wet soil

  • 21 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    i liked reading it aloud. i didn't catch the meaning though. but i loved most poetry because of how i read it and how it sounds. take care:)

  • 21 years ago

    by Aken Sol

    uhhh.... except that part

    ^.^;;

  • 21 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "Live and than, eternal sleep." it should be then

  • 21 years ago

    by Aken Sol

    Every single thing was intentional in my poem. Interpretations any1?
    Aken Sol

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