Walking the Plank

by Allen   Oct 3, 2004


My heart walks the one way plank
Over the frozen loneliness
Swim in it are the disappointments
Which will prey on my ignorance

The conclusion of this trip is clear
Heart drowns, love will be gone
Even though I know the ending
My heart foolishly walks on

There is always this glimpse of hope
That the end a paradise will be hold
My heart will be with the one I long
“I love you too” to me it will be told

Because of this hope
My heart walks the plank
As for the consequences
Ignorance paints it blank

Hope and disbelieve
In my mind they blend
Stopping and going
Heart stumbles to plank’s end

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  • 19 years ago

    by spunk

    i really like you style of poetry, it's very unique, i liked how all the words had a nice rythym, it was well written.
    -spunk-

  • 19 years ago

    by SHYSTY23KO

    This is a great poem! Excellent job! It seems really deep! Thank you for sharing this! It truely is a great poem! Keep up the great work!

  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    I love that poem. I've never seen a poem written like that before. Lovely concept. Well done.

  • 19 years ago

    by Allen

    Thank you all for reading and commenting!!! :) I love you all :D:D:D This is one of my favourite piece... but sad... Anyway, I treasure all your kind words :) I would love to reply one by one but... yeah :D I got a bit lazy :) Will do from now on tho :)

  • 19 years ago

    by xXxLittleAngelxXx

    Another good one Allen!! Bothering You again.. =P But You're Asian.. Coolie, I'm Asian too.. (A) But I don't Life in Asia anymore.. =) Are You Chinese?? I'm most part Vietnamese with a bit Chinese blood.. =) But I Live in Holland (Europe..) =) Anyway, I know how Asian parents can be strict.. You don't wanna know *Talking out of experiences* =P Ghihi, anyway.. Thanks for Your mail.. =) I do get Your story.. I don't know well how to respons on that.. I have a rule with My best friend that we would never date or kiss or whatever with one of the guys she or I had a crush on or kissed.. =) But I do Believe that everything happens for a reason.. So it might hurt now, but afterwards You'll see that it's better to be friends?? Evertime I try to forget about that guy I say that to Myself and "Just save Your Love for someone new, You know some day will come soon.. You will find out that it wasn't meant for You!!" It's of "Song of Love" =) But I talk kinda too much.. AGAIN.. =$ SORRY!! But I liked Your poem, I know how it feels.. *Sights* Anyway: Take care now and have a great day!!

    Ciao xXx Me