Just Thinking!

by Victoria   Oct 6, 2004


Do you have the time?
To read my little rhyme
It speaks of thoughts in my mind
As I think the answers I cannot find
I wonder does this happen to you
Or are my thoughts ridiculously untrue
My head gets muddled with too much thought
If only the true answers were taught
I want to help every person who needs relief
But how can I when my own life causes me so much grief
Do you feel the same as me?
Or has my own pity blinded me so I can’t see
When I look out the window I see an amazing place
A world that never reveals its true face
So much to process in one go
As every image freely flows
My thoughts depend on how I feel
If only they were based on something real
One minute I’m down the next I’m up
My thoughts sometimes are truly corrupt
But I can see how positive life can be
Enabling my thoughts to be flowing and free

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  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    this is one of your best I think.
    you express your thoughts wonderfully
    victoria. I wish I could write like you.
    you write beautifully.
    much love,
    marjan

  • 19 years ago

    by Freakie_D

    Hey, i can so relate, i ask myself those same questions everyday, only i get answers that are negaitive.