Kid-Adults

by Aken Sol   Oct 8, 2004


Missing childhood
Out grown past
Innocence gone
Forever serious
Unnatural fast maturity
Never knowing
Fairy tales
Play dates
Kid games or
Fun
Doomed to be
Criminals
Moral less
Faithless believers
Lonely
Those kid-adults

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  • 21 years ago

    by miss scooby

    NICE WORK!!!

    *Scooby*

  • 21 years ago

    by DMG

    nice kracky

  • 21 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    Yeh I know what you're talking about, people need to slow down and be adult-kids

  • 21 years ago

    by Kevin

    I like the way you write old bean, really i do...you don't get hemmed in by classic structure..

    You know what i'd love thought...and this is only because i do it and being a slightly arrogant being i wish others to reflect my....that you would be more abstract with your poem titles....you know...so it's not so aparent what they're about...could you do that for me big guy?....huh could ya!!

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