A Wet Dream

by Josiah Larson   Oct 21, 2004


As I see her being a wench
getting screwed on my bed
with another person

Its just makes me so sick
I gave you every thing
I used to hug you
I used to love you

But not any more
Take your trash
and get out

I don't care what you have to say
Its not worth my time
Dont try to give me this crap
I have heard it all

Thanks for taking up some of my love
Thanks for wasting my time
Thanks for stealing some of my love

Was it worth your time
Why did you have to be so stupid

That made you lose some thing special
we could of been something
we would've

As I slightly hear a faint noise in my head
Like as if some one was calling me
As I slowly open my eyes
I see my girl laying in bed next to me
Saying its okey You were having a night mare

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robyn

    I like this one like you are riht in the mild of your dream so cool :) great work 5/5
    xoxo robyn

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    oh, good thing it wasn't more than a dream...good work...

    "Thanks for taking up some of my love
    Thanks for wasting my time
    Thanks for stealing some of my love"

    ^ I think it'd be better if you replaced "my love" from the first or last line of that part, it would be better...seems too much like the same thing..... Maybe even something like "Thanks for stealing some of my heart" ...just a suggestion, I don't really know what else to put in there...maybe you could come up with something...

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    great poem josiah....

  • 18 years ago

    by kayt

    another good one buddy

  • 19 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    lol I hope so to
    Thank you for reading it=)

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