Burning

by Luke   Nov 17, 2004


Bless my heart,
Open my eyes,
Let me see
You for the first time,

All of this day,
I know you too well,
Another day with her
As I burn in Hell,

In the strictest sense,
In the hardest way,
I live just to hear you say,
Anything at all,

Another day with her,
But I only want you,
Another night gone by,
And still I want to die

You know me
And I know you,
We both know
What we’ve been through,
So could it be so hard?
In the light we may shine,
Break the ideas that bind us,
Start again

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  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    thanks for the comment

    what a great poem, great rhyming!!

    God Bless
    Love Heather

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Great poem; I can see how your writing always has a dark edge to it- yeah, I do that too. This poem brings out a lot of struggle for the narator. Is it true?

  • 19 years ago

    by courtney

    cute poem...

  • 19 years ago

    by Krete

    Luke, good Poem! I dont recall whether I rated/commented on this poem.y.e.t.so I will find out momentarily.

    [psssst...check out my 'cuties''putsie' poem]

  • 19 years ago

    by Krete

    Nice ending, I enjoy the transitions and rhyme. I could see one of those bands singing it. [one of the popular ones]

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