Moon's Secrets

by Kaitlin Kristina   Dec 4, 2004


Clouds drip past moonlight
Tossed into spirals from a lit ambiance
Beauty radiating from her crying face,
Tears pouring from her eyes
As if she were fighting harsh wind.
Her mouth thrown open from secrets she has yet to tell
That she cannot contain any longer.
Pressed against sky ,
That has been left with glowing lint from the suns evening sweep,
That has been frosted by nightfall
And will be wiped clean by daylight.

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  • 21 years ago

    by ŦōüċhÌήğ ỀνĬĽ

    hehe awesome awesome poem..I agree with Erica the lines:
    Clouds drip past moonlight
    Tossed into spirals from a lit amibance
    Is really good and I like the personification! I really enjoyed this poem cause the moon is my sign and its very descripitive..another job well done by you..I enjoy ur work!! Keep on wwritting okay..excellent job here for sure!

  • 21 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    this is also very good, i like the first two lines:

    Clouds drip past moonlight
    Tossed into spirals from a lit ambiance

    great job... 5/5!

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