Silent girl

by Jenn   Dec 6, 2004


Silent girl looking at me
your looking into space, could you Tell me what you see?

silent girl with the sad sad eyes
could you tell me why you cry?

is it for a lost lover,or the cuts on your arm?
or is it from the abusive father that does you harm

silent girl looking at me,now i realize this sad girl is me

like looking in a mirror, but instead i see my pain, thats when the tears came

as i remember my pain
all my sadness inside

and now i know why this sad girl cry's

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  • 17 years ago

    by Esther

    WOW!! this poem totally moved me!! it was so emotional!! I loved it!! it was da best!! 5/5 please keep writin ones like dis!!

  • 18 years ago

    by meg

    I love this poem sooo much. just like the rest of yours. IM me sometime on AIM. my sn is "x3 ms megan x3". talk to you then.
    5/5
    meg

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    One of your bette peices BJ, i think that it is an amazing peice of literature, your a great poet, your talent truely shows in this. Sorry you have to go through life with the way things are, it completely sucks how some people get their cards dealt.

    Thank you for your continueing comments on my poems, i really appreciate it, i am so glad to come home from work and to see the red next to the comments page.

  • 18 years ago

    by x~broken~angel~x

    that is so good!!! i love it. thanx for commenting on my poem. if u hav the time chel out some of my others! and dont 4get ta comment, ill read some of ur other poems now! bye!

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    wow great poem i can relate 5/5 thanks for the comment on my poems means alot. Much Luv, Manda

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