What has become of me

by joe   Dec 6, 2004


Can only see red lies, and old crimes
So many times blood on the ground for nothing but a hopeless bound
A sickness of hate has doomed down
Pardon this sorrow for it is all I know
along with the symphony damned by its very name
I am to be forgotten
A song none needs to hear
A ballet none needs to read
Just a person with no need to be

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  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    ur really good, its good, thanks for the comment, i never delete my work, even if people hate it so dw but really appreciated it, thanks.
    keep writing,
    ellie

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Very well written but it so saaaddd!!! I want to hug you...You need a hug! Here's a cyber hug..((((((ALLEN)))))))) Keep it up and take care...You commented on one of my poems a bit ago and though it's taken me a long time to return the favor I just wanted you to know that I didn't forget about you. HAPPY HOLIDAYS!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    WOAH!! wow! that poem really moved me!! I could totally relate!!! I think I'll print it out so I can read it over and over cuz it was excellent! great job hun!
    luv elizabeth

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    great poem! i still love ya! hehe i'm in such a good mood. you know what? i miss you. i havent talked to you in so long! hehe, i think people like my email address. can't blame them though because it is just so....meow purdy...hehe. i'm still grounded and i can't check my mail at school. darns it. hehe, oh well. maybe after christmas i'll get my computer back. but of course thats a big maybe. but until then, love ya lots!!!!!

    *hugs and kisses*
    *and smiles too*