Died for TRUE LOVE..

by Victoria   Dec 7, 2004


You got over me so quickly
My insides feel sickly
I loved you so much
I loved your sense and your gentle touch
You holding your new girlfriend in your arms so tight
My eyes get watery, my tears can't fight
Running home not a word to my mom was said
I just collapsed on to my bed
Thinking about him just made me cry
He told me he loved me! Yet he said goodbye
Giving myself to him was important to me
He told me if I did there would always be a 'we'
This makes me so mad!
My heart is weak and I feel really bad
Writing a goodbye note
I slide it into my coat
Picking up my knife
To relieve my pain and strife
It don't take long before my body hits the ground
Later that night Daddy comes in and I am found
He finds the note
And reads what I wrote:
"I want you all to know I died for love.
I couldn't go on my emotions just flood.
And on my grave please do write...
That my broken heart could no longer fight"

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  • 13 years ago

    by Marcus blake

    'Giving myself to him was important to me
    He told me if I did there would always be a 'we'"\

    We've all been fooled by that poison of lies and deceit

  • 14 years ago

    by Jump from Life

    Oh my god.... i cant breathe, your poem made me breathless. trully amazing, utterly astounding. Love it hun 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Rihanna

    I'm speechless..

    And reads what I wrote:
    "I want you all to know I died for love.
    I couldn't go on my emotions just flood.
    And on my grave please do write...
    That my broken heart could no longer fight"

    ^^
    That part got me teared up...it's beautiful

    5/5 deffenitly !!!!

  • 20 years ago

    by Ronni

    Hey.. whats up? i loved that poem. i know how you felt tha guy that i was w/ for almsot 2 years broke up w/ me for another chick.. then i found out that he cheated on me 2 times while we were together.... and i also lost my virginity to him......soo yea! well i love your poems!

    Ronni

  • 20 years ago

    by abcede

    wow... i like that poem, it's so sad! :'(... but very well written! keep up the awesome work!
    love always,
    abcede

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