My Smile- Fake

by Shædow Poet   Dec 17, 2004


My smile,
So simple,
So believably innocent,
free of Facade?
Withered from hate,
Yet, my smiles are completely fake.

My laugh
Small chuckles
So extremely careless
Do you hear it?
Without pain, remorse
Well, you don't know its shadowed source.

My eyes
Crystal blue
Leak this salty liquid
Falling from this deceiving face
Dripping with sorrow,
They will vanish come tomorrow.

My life
Happy living,
A cheery sight for you
Lovely to view?
Look in deeper,
My life, a saddening blue.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    amazing!! i no exactly how u feel. beautiful poem.
    Fighter
    -xXx-

  • 19 years ago

    by helena

    i loved this poem, it was great!! so emotional but using few words!

  • 19 years ago

    by joe

    wow, that was truly a great poem one really worthy of the max 5!!! lol, but seriously amazing one.....kick a**!

  • 19 years ago

    by Amilo

    I like the the structure of your rhymes... my favorite stanza was the one about "my eyes... crystal blue" ... the language in those lines are particulary lovely... still, great work :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Ð맆îñ¥

    OH THATS BRILL N ALL, soz caps. People hoide thigs like this. you capture it very well.

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