Memory Loss

by kid   Dec 22, 2004


What's my name
she can't remember
i died today
and she can't remember

she was the one who ended my life
she can't remember
was it gun or knife

she pushed me off a ledge
said it was suicide
she even cried

she can't remember
she was the killer
if she told the police
it'd be a thriller

she sits in the chair
wondering why they all stare
because she can't remember

a boy was the witness
he saw all of this
but he won't say a word
or anything he heard

he was my boyfriend
he watched me fall to my end
but he won't tell what he saw

because the killer is his mother
and he can't tell a soul
because she can't remember
that my life, she stole

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  • 19 years ago

    by gone back to him

    this poem is soooooooooo good..all of your work is great you write such good poems!

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachel

    WOW!! this is a very unique poem. you express your feelings very well and that shows that you are a good writer because you are able to express yourself through poetry. this poem is very well written and i enjoyed it a lot, it may not be my favorite subject to read about, but this poem, i actually enjoyed reading. you have a true talent in writing. I really enjoy reading your work and i definately want to read more in the future so keep it up, you are really good at what you do. keep on dreaming.

    P.S. that is really cool that you live in Colorado, I live in Thornton. maybe we can keep in touch~

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ nice and sad. well written, enjoyed
    ~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

  • 19 years ago

    by ANNE

    Hey thanks for your comment! Your poems are very special, not like so many other poems! I like your style so keep it up;) And by the way I'm not depressed:) Hugs

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